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Violet CLM Oct 12, 2004 04:19 PM

Violet plays with sprites
 
Say hello to Fooruwoman, everybody...


(Fooruman by Black Ninja and Spotty. Original design by Apogee Software. Fooruwoman sort of by Radium. Original Eva sprite by Nick Stadler, edited by Violet CLM.)

Radium Oct 12, 2004 04:20 PM

You almost resurrected Br+Sal! I saw you!!

Violet CLM Oct 12, 2004 04:23 PM

Meh... transgender sprites weren't too well received there last time around, and this way I have a thread to place later works inside of.

NinJazz Oct 12, 2004 11:36 PM

hello Fooruman, if you are guy in War tavern say those guys to take Mad-Frank to team ;)

Doubble Dutch Oct 13, 2004 05:17 AM

?


Not a bad sprite [but somehow unerving]

LittleFreak Oct 14, 2004 07:48 AM

not bad, but I think it doesn't look like a woman (probably it needs bigger......................................shoes. :) )

Batty Buddy Oct 14, 2004 12:39 PM

Que Passa!!!!

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Originally Posted by Radium
You almost resurrected Br+Sal! I saw you!!

Yeah, well YOU said you had a picture for me in said thread that just needed to be scanned...

Oh, and Fooruwoman... um... is kind of wierd with the............ shoes... Kind of makes it creepy...

Violet CLM Oct 14, 2004 01:34 PM

Fooruwoman IS creepy. And probably has no feet, let alone shoes.

MoonBlazE Oct 15, 2004 04:37 AM

The head's style doesn't really fit with the rest of the body.

Violet CLM Oct 15, 2004 12:35 PM

That makes sense. I'm not too good at heads, and my shading doesn't exactly match Nick's style. Thanks for the comment.

Violet CLM Oct 17, 2004 12:58 AM

Anyone remember this guy? Anyone besides Radium?



(Original sprites by Nick Stadler)

Fawriel Oct 17, 2004 01:18 AM

Please don't tell me that that was supposed to be the original Jazz.

cooba Oct 17, 2004 01:49 AM

I do. ;p No, it wasn't supposed to be Jazz.

Olsen Oct 17, 2004 05:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Unknown Rabbit
Anyone remember this guy? Anyone besides Radium?



(Original sprites by Nick Stadler)

No, tell me who it is!

cooba Oct 17, 2004 05:08 AM

Bonus bunny with tinted gray fur and spandex.

We don't know. He was on the bo of OEM version AFAIK.

Violet CLM Oct 22, 2004 11:48 PM

This is not a serious effort so much as a failed attempt to make Eva easier to animate. It's ugly and scares me.

Doubble Dutch Oct 23, 2004 04:43 AM

I'm scared too. Very scared.

*Whips up worse sprite*

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v410/Gannalev/Crudeva.bmp[/IMG]

Wow, is it haloween already?

Violet CLM Oct 23, 2004 10:46 PM

HE'S BEEN FIX0RED!
 
Edited from the JJA standing sprite.


NinJazz Oct 23, 2004 10:52 PM

cool Fooruman

Violet CLM Oct 23, 2004 11:21 PM

Thanks. It's Fooruwoman, but thanks anyway.

Not much of an update... I was looking at Jazz's pose in the last picture and wondered what his right hand was doing. This seemed the most logical explanation...
[IMG]http://www.tachyonlabs.com/sam/Jazzball.gif[/IMG]

NinJazz Oct 23, 2004 11:27 PM

loolz, ok then it is Fooruwoman

Batty Buddy Oct 24, 2004 12:20 PM

Que Passa!!!!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Unknown Rabbit
Thanks. It's Fooruwoman, but thanks anyway.

Not much of an update... I was looking at Jazz's pose in the last picture and wondered what his right hand was doing. This seemed the most logical explanation...
[IMG]http://www.tachyonlabs.com/sam/Jazzball.gif[/IMG]

Well, if anyone knows how to shoot- it's Jazz...

Violet CLM Oct 26, 2004 11:29 AM

Ok, this is actually an old sprite I did a while ago, but I'm getting annoyed. What do I have to do for a little criticism, or even comments regarding the quality of the work instead of the subject? "I like how the arm is shaded," instead of "Oh, look, it's Eva"? Moonblaze and PHT2 are the only ones of you who seem to have said anything helpful. It's hard to get better this way.


Minion of the Snufuss, scratch sprite (not edited from something else). Minions are ©Radium.

Fawriel Oct 26, 2004 11:37 AM

Well, technically, you never asked for criticism.

The minion is looking quite good. He's too short, though. With that little "tail" on the ground, he'd most likely tumble over at once. The chest is about one or two pixels too thin, the arm on the right ( its left ) in comparison too far away from it. Thickening the chest without moving the arm would probably fix that.
The face looks okay in the smaller one, but in the larger one, kind of strange. The nose should move a pixel to the right. And it's possibly too round. And there is no hair behind its head.. that way, it looks like there's only hair coming from the sides of it.
Other than that, the coloring is done well, it looks good in the small version. But if you intend to use the larger one anywhere, some more detail might be implented, though it isn't necessary.

Radium Oct 26, 2004 11:52 AM

Mass critiquage time =DDD I liked them all, but to save time I'm just going to point out bad things.
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Originally Posted by Unknown Rabbit

The left side of her face (her left) looks strange; I can't really figure it out. And you could give her body a more 3D look if you moved the two gold lines on the front of her shirt to the right.
Quote:

Originally Posted by Unknown Rabbit


Again, move the stuff on the front of his chest to the right a bit. As is, he looks somewhat like a cardboard cutout. He also looks like he needs visible pectoral muscles. And his right hand in the first picture looks backwards.
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Originally Posted by Unknown Rabbit

No on so many levels.
Quote:

Originally Posted by Unknown Rabbit

The gun looks like its handle comes off at a 45 degree angle.
Quote:

Originally Posted by Unknown Rabbit

The left shoulder looks disconnected. Move the nose and features on the front of the body a little to the right to add more depth. And L33tz4n was the only Minion with yellow eyes.

Okay, done =D

Anubis Oct 27, 2004 12:55 AM

Fooruwoman is weird...Some of you have heard of Foo Races where the bad guy is Fooruman. (forgot their site)

cooba Oct 27, 2004 05:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alexander BG
Some of you have heard of Foo Races where the bad guy is Fooruman.

I am sure almost everyone here does. And Fooruman isn't bad, the players are.

Anyway, I agree with what Radium basically said; that short Eva thing in particular.

Violet CLM Oct 27, 2004 12:18 PM

The site you are thinking of is probably www.fooproducts.com. It is hard to say exactly which side is the bad guys, as it seems to change between levels. Sometimes you're on one side, sometimes the other. Meanwhile...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Piccolo
And there is no hair behind its head.. that way, it looks like there's only hair coming from the sides of it.

I'm... not quite sure what you mean.
Quote:

Originally Posted by Fawriel
Other than that, the coloring is done well, it looks good in the small version. But if you intend to use the larger one anywhere, some more detail might be implented, though it isn't necessary.

The larger one is just the same image with different HTML. It probably wouldn't be used at double size, but it's easier that way if you want to pick out small details.
Quote:

Originally Posted by Terminator
The left side of her face (her left) looks strange; I can't really figure it out.

Yeah, it sticks out too much. I think that's supposed to be the beard, but I'm not sure.
Quote:

Originally Posted by Radium
No on so many levels.

:+
Quote:

Originally Posted by Radium
And L33tz4n was the only Minion with yellow eyes.

...you're right. I think it was supposed to be a male version of L33tz4n, but I decided there was really no difference between that and a normal minion. Forgot the eyes, though.

Fawriel Oct 27, 2004 12:44 PM

.......... between the hair at the left side and the head, there are three pixels that are transparent, while they should be the same color as the hair, unless that minion has a REALLY strange haircut.
And I know that the larger image is the same one, but sprites are usually used in a higher resolution, so you see more details, which is why you could put in more details if that is the case.

Violet CLM Oct 30, 2004 01:27 AM


Young Eva should stop playing with guns if she ever wants to marry someone respectable. :(
(Original characters and sprites are © Nick Stadler and Dean Dodrill)

Risp_old Oct 30, 2004 04:25 AM

The hair on the minion looks more like a hood. And the neck looks flat, it needs to stop being solid color.


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