A picture of Jazz
 

I'm not too good with MS paint so it's not that good, but for a begginer...

[IMG]http://img80.exs.cx/img80/5886/jazzjackrabbit6vc.png[/IMG]

[EDIT] I made a direct image for ease

Let's just say it's abstract. :P

Eheh. It's not all too bad, actually. You got some details relatively nicely done. The ears, for example.

:D!!

What's the big orange circle? And Jazz's teeth should be white, not green.

lol nice

Jazz has an orange shoulder band, Violet. ;) Either that or it's part of the backpack with poorly done layers.

Hmmm, you should really try cubist, or perhaps abstract painting. You'd be real good.

No kidding.

No insult either.

:p well I think that rox

Thanks for posotive feedback

I re-did it with more effort and concentration

[IMG]http://img160.exs.cx/img160/5827/jazznew1wh.png[/IMG]

Thoughts?

Wow. Much improvement indeed; that's very good for something made in MSPaint. His ears seem kind of small in the new one, however.

The new one's much better. :)

I agree that the ears are too small though.

EDIT:

The way Jazz holds his gun is a little bit wrong, one of the fingers should be behind the gun.

Hide his thumb behind the gun, make the ears larger, and make the eyes black-on-blue, not blue-on-black. Otherwise, this is very impressive for an MSPaint drawing.

I must agree

Look, I don't really wanna do it again

Let's just say it's a big improvment, I made a few mistakes but it's good for an MS paint drawing

gg no re

You don't have to remake a drawing after you've done it already. Criticism is there for future reference mostly.

You did it very well, though it's not perfect. You'll probably do better in your next picture, even if it's not about Jazz.