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NaT May 31, 2005 07:58 AM

NaT's Drawings
 
Well here are some Men look at them, and rate them...(how I draw) :-)
[IMG]http://img169.echo.cx/img169/4995/strongman1en.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://img169.echo.cx/img169/4488/mannn0il.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://img169.echo.cx/img169/9674/longhairman8wv.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://img37.echo.cx/img37/228/hairman9uu.png[/IMG]

Odin May 31, 2005 11:03 AM

Here's a much better idea:

1. Get some cheap hosting.

2. Put your drawings up there.

3. Post a link to your site in your sig.

Or, you could just join DeviantArt. There's a Jazz Jackrabbit club there.

Baggers May 31, 2005 12:25 PM

1) Very nice
3) Very nice
4&2) pretty good but a bit same-y

NaT May 31, 2005 11:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Odin
Here's a much better idea:

1. Get some cheap hosting.

2. Put your drawings up there.

3. Post a link to your site in your sig.

Or, you could just join DeviantArt. There's a Jazz Jackrabbit club there.

And where is this DeviantArt???

Baggers Jun 1, 2005 01:08 AM

Nat: Dude google doesnt hurt !

Odin: why the problwm with nat posting his work here ?..i dont get it...or is there soemthing in the rules i havnt read?

NaT Jun 1, 2005 01:11 AM

What's with this Google??

Baggers Jun 1, 2005 01:52 AM

hehe cheeky begger -
http://www.google.co.uk/search?q=Dev...en-GB:official

NaT Jun 1, 2005 06:14 AM

cartoon
 
look at my cartoon..on wich im working now...
[IMG]http://img141.echo.cx/img141/5037/max22ul.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://img141.echo.cx/img141/6496/thewar1fl.png[/IMG]

n00b Jun 1, 2005 11:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Odin
Here's a much better idea:

1. Get some cheap hosting.

2. Put your drawings up there.

3. Post a link to your site in your sig.

Or, you could just join DeviantArt. There's a Jazz Jackrabbit club there.

Yes much better, defeat the whole purpose of having an art forum.

Baggers Jun 1, 2005 12:44 PM

Yes much better, defeat the whole purpose of having an art forum.
Yeah I dont get what he's done wrong ?

@Nat: Nice work, whats the guy in the first pic wearing on his head ?

NaT Jun 1, 2005 12:48 PM

It was wery hard to draw it but I did it!!! (it's a hat)...... he's a leutenant....

Odin Jun 1, 2005 05:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NaT

Not bad. Your style reminds me of Shmorky, but with thinner lines.

Just so you know, if you have images larger than 640x480, link them.

Baggers Jun 2, 2005 03:12 AM

Is there a size rule...sorry i didnt know

Blade Nightflame Jun 5, 2005 01:15 AM

Darn, I love the style, so simple, yes, so funky. Good job there.

Blackraptor Jun 5, 2005 07:21 AM

You have an interesting drawing style, and the pictures look cool so keep drawing more!

NaT Jun 6, 2005 03:03 AM

Thanks........ i will...

LittleFreak Jun 6, 2005 08:28 AM

Quiet cool drawing style. :)

However, I think you should try out drawing something different than soldiers with ugly noses ;D

n00b Jun 6, 2005 12:22 PM

He does, didin't you see the first 4? 3 of those dudes look like hippies man.

Coppertop Jun 6, 2005 12:51 PM

I like your style, Nat. Looks good.

NaT Jun 6, 2005 09:34 PM

Fast and Easy! thats how I call my style!

NaT Jun 6, 2005 10:11 PM

Here........Piccolo......heh :lol:
[IMG]http://img300.echo.cx/img300/9940/piccollo5vv.png[/IMG]

MoonBlazE Jun 6, 2005 10:57 PM

I think the biggest problem with your dwarings is that they all look the same. After seeing your first few ones there wasn't anything new or unexpected to see. You should really try putting some more powerful expressions into your characters.

LittleFreak Jun 7, 2005 02:18 AM

That's what I wanted to say, I just expressed it the wrong way.

I hate (HATE) my art teacher, but she said one thing that is actually true: An artist who always draws the same isn't an artist.

I still hate her, but that one sentence is true.

No offense to you of course. ;)

Sun Fun Dude Jun 7, 2005 04:19 AM

Yeah they almost all have the same hair, nose, head shape and expression, I mean the style's nice but you've got to work some more on it.

Fawriel Jun 7, 2005 05:32 AM

Another thing you need to work on is anatomy.
I don't mean correct proportions, but their limbs and such should all be the same length and everything ( note how that is not the case with the.. boxer..? in the first post ).
Also, your characters need some better proportions to be more flexible. You almost always draw them with their hands down, and I can't really imagine them being in a different position, like cheering, hands pointing up.
Also, look at the soldier with the shotgun. Thanks to his lack of fingers, he isn't actually holding the gun, he's kind of balancing it on his hand, and the right hand ( from his view ) seems to either be one half too short or to bend wrong.
A different, cartoony style is nice and all, but it has to actually work, too.

..also, I wonder whether you ever drew a woman.

NaT Jun 7, 2005 06:44 AM

Flexible? Hands Up! hehe! woman........aaaa..... next time! ok?
[IMG]http://img267.echo.cx/img267/1442/criminal6bo.png[/IMG]

LittleFreak Jun 7, 2005 08:01 AM

@ Fawriel: I don't really see the need for the proportions to be 100% right, after all it's a comic style so that isn't needed imo.

HEART OF IRON Jun 7, 2005 09:33 AM

here if you don't know how to draw woman..i can teach you...
[IMG]http://img35.echo.cx/img35/7481/woman0ty.png[/IMG] just draw a man with long hair ... :lol: :lol:

Fawriel Jun 7, 2005 09:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LittleFreak
@ Fawriel: I don't really see the need for the proportions to be 100% right, after all it's a comic style so that isn't needed imo.

adsadsada
You didn't listen.
I never said the proportions had to be correct, but there have to be SOME. I mean, his characters practically don't even have fingers!

White Rabbit Jun 7, 2005 09:43 AM

Jedis don't need clumsy, mechanical fingers: the Force is universal.

LittleFreak Jun 7, 2005 10:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Heart of iron
just draw a man with long hair ...

Does that mean I'm a woman just because I'm having long hair? >O

The picture is wicked though. =P

Sun Fun Dude Jun 7, 2005 02:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NaT
Flexible? Hands Up! hehe! woman........aaaa..... next time! ok?

Well, looks ok but the two guys still look like exactly the same person, you need to make them more distinctive. Another thing is angles, you seem to always draw you characters from the same view, maybe you could spice that up a bit. And yeah also maybe do some members of the opposite sex...

NinJazz Jun 8, 2005 05:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sun Fun Dude
Well, looks ok but the two guys still look like exactly the same person, you need to make them more distinctive. Another thing is angles, you seem to always draw you characters from the same view, maybe you could spice that up a bit. And yeah also maybe do some members of the opposite sex...

Don't listen to Alex he draws men as birds...

Sun Fun Dude Jun 8, 2005 01:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ninjajazz
Don't listen to Alex he draws men as birds...

Huh? I'm trying to give art advice and he shouldn't listen because I have a bird character? Where's the logic?

NaT Jun 8, 2005 10:08 PM

Cool! show me some of you're art (Birds)!

Sun Fun Dude Jun 8, 2005 10:56 PM

Ok...
http://www.deviantart.com/view/15715023/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/14244938/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/15715087/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/15442855/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/17569277/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/12462183/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/17173221/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/17102767/
This is all the bird stuff I could find in the gallery, but please don't anyone take the attention of the thread way from NaT, he just wanted to see them ;)

NaT Jun 8, 2005 11:30 PM

Wow it's really good!!! I see you draw in Flash no? I really liked the comics you made! Not long ago I drew only animals too! but then I desided to draw Humans to put in my cartoons some history like......About Napoleon or something! Well..... once again Congradulations! ;)

HEART OF IRON Jun 9, 2005 12:57 AM

Well for me your drawings are nice ,,but your animation i don't like..
Here look at my animation (don't look at the story) here http://foxmage.com/The%20Blessing.exe :D

HEART OF IRON Jun 9, 2005 01:51 AM

Here look one more of my...
[IMG]http://img295.echo.cx/img295/6874/frizer9sc.th.png[/IMG]

Sun Fun Dude Jun 9, 2005 02:17 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HEART OF IRON
Well for me your drawings are nice ,,but your animation i don't like..
Here look at my animation (don't look at the story) here http://foxmage.com/The%20Blessing.exe :D

Well your animation is OK, don't exatcly see what I could learn from it, if anything I could teach you how to animate some better walking, and why does that bird flap his wings only half way. Sorry for all these comments but you seemed to think that your animation was superior to mine so I thought perhaps I should point out your animation faults too ;) Anyway, let's not get on the subject of how good or bad I am at animating (I don't see how you're any better really ;)) and get back on topic.


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