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FreeLance Jan 25, 2006 02:41 AM

Sweet dreams :)
 
[IMG]http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e390/flusht/the-stare.jpg[/IMG]

Feedback is great and all, but I really don't care either way. I had fun making it and enjoy the product. :)

UNKNOWNFILE Jan 25, 2006 06:42 AM

What've you been smokin'? ;p

LittleFreak Jan 25, 2006 06:49 AM

That is actually very good. Looks a little disturbing though... Unfitting title. =P

FreeLance Jan 25, 2006 09:44 AM

Thanks :)
It started out upbeat but turned out a little more creepy than I had expected. Hence the subject line :)

And I've been smoking..umm..some aboriginal mixture for insanity. (or not)

Fawriel Jan 25, 2006 10:47 AM

It's definitely original. o_o
That alone is already something that makes this an interesting piece. Never seen anything quite like it, I think.
The reason for the creepiness, I think, is mainly the fact that the lines of the face are so.. shaky. It looks blurred, trembling, you know. Smoother lines would easily make it seem less strange to the eye. Another thing might be the colors.. they are pretty pale, and they don't harmonize well... if you were going for an upbeat picture in the first place, vibrant colors would have been a better choice.

Cobra Jan 25, 2006 10:56 AM

Oh lancip00, what a lovely statement.

White Rabbit Jan 25, 2006 11:19 AM

It's disturbing, the colour combination just goes against the laws of nature, the lines are really rough and black, and the eyes are distinctly disproportionate to each other, as well as the head.

It's ugly, it has a mood I don't want to feel and I don't like it. But it's done in a convincing way...

FreeLance Jan 25, 2006 12:25 PM

Thanks for the feedback, folks :)

White Rabbit, that's pretty much how I feel as well. I'm glad it came across :)

Radium Jan 25, 2006 01:00 PM

White Rabbit put it better than I could. It looks creepy and unnatural, and makes you feel uncomfortable, like something's wrong with it. If that's the effect you wanted, awesome job.

Pointy Jan 25, 2006 06:35 PM

I enjoy this. The green/pink combination is very striking.

Doubble Dutch Jan 26, 2006 12:29 AM

Like you said; feedback is okay, but it looks like it was fun to make, good work!

FreeLance Jan 27, 2006 10:08 AM

Thanks :)


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