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n00b Jan 25, 2006 12:16 PM

Incredibly Generic Spaz Fanart
 
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/28165870/

Apparently a goth loves it, so I'm sure I did something right.

White Rabbit Jan 25, 2006 02:10 PM

Is that...a *hypno* inside his mouth? :|

UNKNOWNFILE Jan 25, 2006 02:16 PM

Antifreeze + gargle
OR
fork + your wrist

Radium Jan 25, 2006 03:40 PM

Unknown, don't spam.

Anyway, RADDYCRITICISMtime. Something I want to point out overall is that places like his ears and legs connect very sharply with the rest of his body, like they were originally not attached and just jabbed in. Also, WR brings up a good point about his mouth. Adding all those circles is too much detail.
With his hands, you're making his thumb look too much like his other fingers. Instead, give the thumb more of a "drumstick" shape, with a round, thicker part near the base.
I think that's all. Good job on everything I didn't mention.

UNKNOWNFILE Jan 25, 2006 03:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Radium
Unknown, don't spam.

that != spam

that == this art sux

Risp_old Jan 25, 2006 03:56 PM

Radium! Spam is posts with no purpose. That post had the valid purpose- for UF to say he hates n00b's work and to threaten to kill him!

n00b Jan 25, 2006 05:21 PM

Thanks Rad for the critique, it's very valuble and I will keep the points you made in mind the next time I draw.

Anyhow on the circles, apparently I had recalled seeing a pic of Spaz when he had circles in his mouth, but I cannot find that picture so either I saw it on some other character, or never saw circles in a cartoon's mouth at all. I'm going to go witht he latter.

Doubble Dutch Jan 26, 2006 12:26 AM

Well; its generic, but not *incredibly* generic; its a pretty good effort; a little practice perhaps to smooth out the outline and develop a more solid style; Radium makes some good points, but aside from that, a good effort.

LittleFreak Jan 26, 2006 12:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Risp_old
Radium! Spam is posts with no purpose. That post had the valid purpose- for UF to say he hates n00b's work and to threaten to kill him!

On the contrary though, a major amount of UF's posts consist of telling people they suck, and there isn't given any reason for the suckivity (or whatever) of n00b or his art either. Which leads to the conclusion that, as we already know by heart that we all suck, the post is pretty much useless => spam.

Personally, I like it, though the drawing has some problems, which Rad already pointed out. I'd like to add though, that even if the circles weren't added the mouth was probably too light (compare it to the dark parts of Spaz' fur).

Other than that, good job. =D

CrimiClown Jan 27, 2006 04:39 AM

I really like this, although his socks/elastic hippy shoes should be a bit longer, if you compare them to the ones in the game. =D


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