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Since nobody seems to want to comment on my art on DA anymore...

It looks like I'll have to bother you guys with it. Whee!



This is Kariya, from my story Fabella Vitae.

And to all the critics out there ( Yes, I mean you, Unknown ), I already know that I messed up the lighting in her hair and the pants, that her ears look weird and her pose doesn't make sense. Yay.
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nice, keep making art.
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Is that an invisible button she's pressing? Otherwise it's perhaps a bit kangaroony (look at feet). Still good thoguh.
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Me like.
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Awesome drawing 'Faw.
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I've always liked your drawings. =D

This one is not flawless, but I find it pretty good. ^^
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Flawless..? It's Fawful!
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Flawless..? It's Fawful!
OH GAWD YES!

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Well, thanks, everyone. ^^'
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And to all the critics out there ( Yes, I mean you, Unknown ), I already know that I messed up the lighting in her hair and the pants, that her ears look weird and her pose doesn't make sense. Yay.
They kind of look like bananas... I think the real problem is that they're at different angles. The hair is also a little long, but I approve of the upwards part. Nice tan.
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The right ear (Our right. >>) seems a bit too wrong, in the way of direction. It defies the laws of physics, XD.
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Que Passa!!!!

My favorite characters of yours is Takiri. Kariya is cool too, though...
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*lix*

Nice drawing.... gotta love it <3
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Very nice!!! It's practically flawless!!!
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If all of you think this is nice! then you have to look at my pictures and I don't even know what will you say!!!
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If all of you think this is nice! then you have to look at my pictures and I don't even know what will you say!!!
Remeber kids! =D

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Only I don't know how to put pictures here!
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Remeber kids! =D
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And, thanks, Kaine.

By the way, improved again. Muah.



Maybe I'll make an own thread for the colored version. If there'll be one.

For the not-so-extremely observant, this picture differs in style from my previous ones.This is what future pictures of mine will be drawn like. Be afraid. Or excited. But very much so in any case.

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Remeber kids! =D
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Only I don't know how to put pictures here!
Upload your pics somewhere, for example at gameshack.com.

To post a picture over here, use the following tags without the spaces.

[ img ]http://images.bravenet.com/common/images/smilies/bouncer.gif[ /img ]

If you leave out the spaces, it gets

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Nice style. It would be a good idea to use more than one face variation though.
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I don't like how the Nazi is killing the Russian.
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It's not one face it's just that it's winter time so you can't see them very well !!!! heh!
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That's a lie! =P
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Well then i will draw another one a better one!!!
Anyway here are some more faces!!! the SCARYEST!!!! and the UGLYEST!!!
Plese tell me, do they look thesame???



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Heh, your style seems to work a lot better than it seemed to be. Keep on making pictures, and try to use more colors than green and gray.
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I draw with pencels so it's gray and I don't have a scanner, so I photo them with a digital camera.
And mayby I will show you one day my work with colours!!!
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Your drawings are pretty good (though I still don't like the first one). The face style seems to be always similiar though.

I guess you'd be good in drawing comics or the like, your faces look very cartoony.

However, you've stolen lil Fawie's topic. >O
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Indeed.
And even though my art isn't too great and not nearly as stylized as yours, I don't think yours is quite good enough for you to justify putting down mine.
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Where did he put down your art, Faw? But you're right, Nat should open a topic for his own art rather than posting it here.
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If all of you think this is nice! then you have to look at my pictures and I don't even know what will you say!!!
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Well you asked for proof!!!!
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I can't find anything to criticize, since I'm not much of an artist anyway.
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I can't find anything to criticize, since I'm not much of an artist anyway.
Now, I wouldn't say that. Anyone can become an artist with effort, determination, and money.
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Yeah, my art would drop like flies before anyone else's art.
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Now, I wouldn't say that. Anyone can become an artist with effort, determination, and money.
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Well you asked for proof!!!!
I'm not saying your art is bad. You draw very good actually.

But still, just coming over here and saying "My art is a lot better!!!" isn't very nice at all.
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Well I guess ,sorry!!!
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