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Talking The Total Freaks' logo

What about this? I'd just like to hear what you think of this.
Btw: JoJo hasn't seen it yet ...

And I'd also like to hear suggestions for improvement !

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Ok, to be very honest:

-ditch the [ and ], the logo looks too much like GPW's with them. Of course it's ok to have them in your clantag, but you don't nessecarily have to put them into the clan's logo.
-ditch the spaz, or try to find a better pic of him and put him into the background and make him bigger.
-try to make the text and the spaz fit each other - find suitable colors.

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Like it, but..:
Too standard in my opinion,
and jup loose the []'s, they let it look like gpw's logo,yes, but they are too..ehm...standard, its kinda a trend in my opinion to put these things around everything
I'd like to make a logo for ya

ohyea, when will we do that duel ?
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OK. At least, it's just a beta version, but you make me going on with it ;P!
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You didn't spend much time on that, huh? ;P
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Don't you think it's a little standard? Try something which is more complicated or more original. This is just a standard JJ2 background, with a TF text using inner bevel I guess.
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A bit to simple IMHO
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You might make the background a little more colourful. Spaz just doesn't look so nice with the grey. Try removing the [], not really because it looks like GpW, i just think the logo looks better without them.

Other than that, this logo looks fine.

Oh yes, almost forgot: Long live TF!
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Keep the Spaz. It suits the name well.
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Not bad. It needs to look more interesting and better looking. Thats about all i can say about it.
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perhaps it would look good if spaz was shooting toasters..
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PICCYYY!!!!
Eheheh, sorry, its just a PICCY, but i love PICCYS!!!
Time for suggestions!

the [] tags look fine, but another font would help, that one looks too simple (arial i think). Try somehting like impact, a nice one for big logos, or Arial Rounded mt Bold (i think thats it), which should fit nicely with comic sans at the bottom. Or you can just go to http://www.acidfonts.com

The photoshop rendered clouds look fine (contrary to belief that they are JJ2 clouds, they have too many colours). Also, I agree with splashs idea with the big background spaz, add it into a new layer, boosts its size (smart size, not pixel resize), make it greyscale (to fit with the clouds), make it between 50-70% visible and merge it with the background. Since total greyness looks dull id suggest u add 20% blue to that new spazticular bg and make the text bright red.

Also, the text effects could be improved a bit, give them a very blurry drop shadow (fits nicely with the clouds). The softness of the inner bevel is way too much (especially on the bottom text). Make it somehting like 5-10 at the most. Increase the depth a bit aswell, ud want a big beefy logo.

There are about 1001 other niftular things u can do with it, but id better stop now, as those are barely noticeable and take hours of time

On a side note, why would you want to make a logo with paint shop pro if you have photoshop?
*realizes thats a dumb thing to ask since he has photoshop aswell but still uses psp7*
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Moonblaze's right: I didn't spend much time on this. And also Disguise's right: this are Photoshop-clouds .
OK. Ill think of your suggestions. A new one will come. Soon ...
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*keeps his mouth shut to see the next release first*
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*waits on the logo and the site ;P*
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I have the Slipknot-font somewhere... it would look very good if we wrote "Total Freaks" with it
Really... uhm... freeeky
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Slipknot? Slipknot?! Did you say Sli... oh nevermind, you were just referring to font, phew...
You could also use the Korn font. On second thought, its overused, so...

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Quote:
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The Slipknot font or the KoRn font?
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