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I'm making a new story, one that is likely to be finished since the story line is laid out =D.



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K, I'll just look you guys up in the profiles thread...



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Uhhh. Okay then.

Can I be in it, a grouchy ol' mod like me, if I don't move it?



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I'll be in it if you want me to be. Here's my profile:



Looks: Okay, I'm a male blue rabbit, with one floppy ear, I wear a Brown Trench coat, and have a black dog tag which has my name on it.



Weapon: White electrical sword



Skills: Everything I'm a skilled runner, swimmer, climber, fighter, jumper, etc. etc.



Powers: Can make my hands start flaming, and then suddenly shoot out a ball of flame at someone/something. (Basicly a fireball).



Also can do a super stomp with his foot, knocking everyone else off their feet.



Favorite Food: Pizza



Mom and Dad: Dead





Brothers and/or Sisters: none



Magic: none



Other: I'm kind of a wanna-be funny guy. (Bad jokes and stuff) (If you can make me that way in your story. Otherwise, forget it. ) But I'm serious when needed of coarse.
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Name: Ax Man



Looks: A Dark blue rabbit, with a deep scar under my left eye. If we are getting into esthicits i have deep green eyes. Very strong looking hands and a very deep gash on my shoulder from my battle with Govadon. I also have a chain mail and matching shield bearing a king's symbol (Mine is Aqruin but u can change it) I also wear a blood read cape that I stole from Govadon when I killed him.



Weapon: a magical sword called Govalan. The sword has a beautiflly engraved scabberd, with a picture of a dragon in flight. When Drawn the sword emits a purple light to show it's power. The handle of the sword has a picture of a king with a halo around his head...The following poem is engraved in the handle in ancient ruins:





The sword of power

The sword of strength

The sword to banish evil’s bane.



The one of legend

The one of truth

The king of all that walks



The wand is yours

But is not

Heed it careful

But never enough



The great lord shall return

From his tomb of stone

Once again to try and rule the world



To banish him is your right by birth

Heed it well it is a task of truth

For pure you must be

Or embrace yourself to it’s evil



For the sword heed’s by its emotion

When wielding it be true to your heart

And not your mind. For if so you shall truly die.



Until the day the sword is named

Heed it carefully, because you shall not know your birthright

Use it only for good not for evil,

Shall you become a service of the great lord

In his task to rule the world







Skills: Sword Fighting



Heritage: Comes from a long line of king's which was unoknown to him at birth. THe fight with Govadon and then with the Dark Shadow made him come to this realization to rule the land.



Powers: The Wand (See my story) has left a mark on him. If he thinks hard enough he can heal wounds. This takes extreme concentration and drains his own energy..nearly killing him.



Dark Powers: His sword has a mind of it's own, that convinces the handler to use it for dark purposes. It was made so only I can handle it properly, but even i have a problem with it. If you submit you will do\execute things that can drive a man to insanity. It will act off of the handlers darkest thoughts.



Brothers & Sisters: None...They were wiped out in an attempt by a neighbouring country to inherit the throne. That is why i was taken away from my kingdom.



Parents: Dead...They were wiped out in an attempt by a neighbouring country to inherit the throne. That is why i was taken away from my kingdom.



Foster Parent: Unowkn. He left me when i was old enough to fight, at the Aqruin gates.



Misc: I am usually a very serious man. The sword has left a mark on me. When asked about my kingdom, i alwasy reply "It was the past" I have been known to cast sarcastic jokes though. After battle it is best that i am left alone though. I usually mourn all of the Dead.


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My fur is completely white except for glowing white tail, palms, and the insides of my ears. Weapons are, uh, a crook made of White Birch, that has a half moon and some snowflakes carved on it. It's at times it seems possesed. :> Good for catching people, though My Jello~Ray Gun(c) (can't forget THAT ) which shoots burning blue raspberry Jello, and my amulet isn't really a weapon, I guess. It hangs on a silver chain around my neck, and it's a purple stone that when I press turns me into a black sheep. I have a kick thing, but it's sort of weird, so don't use it if you don't care to. I wear a short halter top, tye-dye or blue, and dull orange canvas pants. I have light hair, probably blueish, that I usually have it in a ponytail with a knot twisted into the bottom, or in a black bandana My earings (two one one ear, three one the other) are just hoops, except for the extra, which is for picking locks. I'm single, and don't have any family to speak of. I'm slightly reclusive, but if I get a friend, it's my friend for life. I'm shy around people I don't know; don't like it when people have a problem with me doing somthing or going somewhere because I'm a girl.





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You will look in the....okay then. So I don't have to type it out here? My profile?

eeevilspace bar!!

Ehh.

So, when can we excpect the first installment?



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WHEN is it coming?????????
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yes! we want the story.we want the story!
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Must find file I put it in...
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Prolouge

Some people believe that the faster you go, the more time slows down. Others believe there are space-time contium votexes lying around the universe that can take you to an unknown place. The rest I guess believe there's no such thing as time. But what if there was a way? A way to set back the clock to when reptiles ruled the world? A way to see an old friend, or meet your past self? A way to prevent a global disaster... a way to prevent Naolix?





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Yes! Yes, more! Come ON, Kaz, you are going to kill us all.

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Chapter 1

When did you go?

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Two dark figures... anger developing in them as they watched the screen. The screen displayed a holo image of several rabbits and a bird defending Carrotus.

(screen)

"You fools! You have not won yet," a Tuf Turt screamed at them and fired a beam of acid at Ax Man.

"Jelloriffic!" A white rabbit yelled and counteracted the acid blast with a blazing blue rasberry jello blast. Another grey rabbit pointed at staff with a piece of what looked like sparif at the turtle and turned him into literually toast. Ax Man, greatful for the save, and another blue rabbit with a floppy ear, each slashed the Tuf Turt from different sides knocking him unconcious.

"My turn!" A red bird said air lifting the turtle over a lake and dropping him... in what seemed like a belly flop.

"That was cold Kaz," Ducky, the previous grey rabbit commented.

"He'll be okay with that shell of his," Kaz replied back.

"Great job guys..." Ax man said.

"I'm hungry," Bboy added to the conversation.

"Hmm, I think we should get Chinese" said Kaz,

"AHEM!" Blacksheep ahemed,

"Oh right," Kaz said and crossed out the bubble he said before.

"I think we should get pizza!" Bboy demanded, somewhat.

"You would," Ducky cried. Pizza everyone knew was BBoy's favorite food... it's even in his profile!

"What's wrong with pizza?" Bboy asked back. The group started to move to the Tavern.

"Everything! You're always thinking about it! You're possessed by the pepperoni!" Ducky bursted out.

"I'm going to eat j00!" Bboy said back in a creepy possessed voice.

"HEY! Wait up!" Ducky said catching up to the group.

(/screen)

"HOW CAN THEY BE SO CALM?!" The bigger shadow said. He busted the screen with a psychic power.

"Relax, we'll get them, we always get who we want..." the smaller shadow said in a calming voice, he seemed to be scheming something, evil. He called upon his tatics officer.

"Yes sir?" a fat little toad with a high pitched voice said.

"Tell me the stats of these characters all compared to the turtle," the tatics officer compared each of the rabbits or bird at an average 1/7th of the turtle's power and speed and other stuff.

"THEN HOW ARE THEY GETTING TO BEAT HIM WITH MISSING OVER 28% OF THE POWER NEEDED?!" the bigger shadow even more confused and angry then ever stomped on the floor with his foot.

"...teamwork..." the tatic professor said,

"What?" the smaller shadow asked.

"Teamwork, it's a term they use, it's several people acting as a big team," the tatics professor said.

"Well then now, we'll just have to seperate them to prevent this teamwork..." the bigger shadow said planning something else.

"We can just pick them off one by one," the smaller shadow said.

"Might I remind you that these rabbits and they're technology can reach to the other side of the universe and fast?" The tatics professor said.

"1... 2... 3d..., there's no way!" The bigger shadow said, the 3d world couldn't seperate this team.

"I have the solution, 4d..." the smaller shadow suggested.

"Ah! Charge the chronological disruptor and modify it to emit several different frequency frozen rays!"

"Those rabbits will be tossed all over the world, but they won't find eachother, never in this time period!"
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YaY Kaz!

Very rux0r

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Kewlish chapter, Kazoo.
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Please Kaz! Do continue! Very coolish! Now don't make me die for another chapter
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I'll just wait for Ax to die and then I'll post!

jk!



Chapter 2

Flux you too!

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The heroes drank in the tavern. Aye, it was a good fight, a little easy, but good for the souls. "Turtles are weak," Ax man said. Everyone nodded in agreement.

"It's old age, oldies always talk about how hard they were in the past," Ducky contradicted. She knew about the past. She knew that none of us could survive alone, but it wasn't a fact that liked to be mentioned.

"sammie! Give all of us a pizza!" Bboy commanded.

"New user, authorization code?" A voice out of no where responded. It was the overabused plot whole SAM =D.

"uh, 93203?" Bboy said still hoping for a pizza.

"Incorrect," SAM replied back.

"Very user friendly..." Ax Man said.

"Incorrect," SAM repeated.

"erm..." Kazooie questioned himself.

"Incorrect," SAM repeated once again.

"Quiet!" Ducky yelled.

"Incorrect," SAM didn't want to shut up dangit!

"Well, you haven't built the system well enough?"

"Incorrect," This time it slowed down.

"Diagnostic!" Kaz screamed.

"5 chronological disortion weapons are currently firing," SAM read out.

"WHAT?!" Everyone screamed at once. How predictable, no?

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Nothing.

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"ACK!" Kaz screamed at everything around him decayed. All the life was falling apart quite literually! Skin, rotting skin! Everything died! Bones, now just dust!

"Aw crap! Not again!" Kaz said wondering if there was anyone else in the tavern. The Tavern still had the same walls, but, burnt, decayed, ruined somewhat! The red bird looked around.

"Hmm, wonder what's outside..." Kazooie pondered to himself and peered out the window just in case. He was unlucky, thousands of turtles!! Most of them had robotic implants. No wait! He studied one of the shapes of an implant. That technology wasn't going to be released for... ... ... .

"Crappo!" he said to himself. He wondered when and where the others were.



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"I'm telling you, I saw something crash over there!" One green rabbit complained to the other.

Earlier that day a fallen star shot from the sky. That is what it seemed like... by some kind of fault from protection systems, Ax Man was hurled all the way to Medivo. He survived.

"Whoever fired that is in big trouble..." Ax man got up and looked at his enviorment. Seemed like woods. No wait, this was wrong. He went up to a tree and cut off a branch and studied the rings, the leaves, and the bark. This was all wrong. These kinds of trees are extinct...



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Kovu watched them, all being flung off and dissapeared before reaching out of sight range.

"SAM! Make me a pi- uh! Get ready to make a Chrono's Cycle." Kovu yelled out.

"New use-"

"Skip the formalities and get to it!" Kovu lashed out at her.

"Fine, have it your way..." SAM replied back and started charging.



Sue me, it's short.


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I c'n join! Don't use my prof. in the Profile Tread, I need to fix it. F'r now I'm grey, with green eyes, black hair and a sword. . .
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Ooh. Happyfulness, this is quite, um...nice

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Boy, I'm sorry, but I'm very confused.... What just happened after I asked for the pizza???
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Aye, I'll continue it... I'll see what I can do for you copper )=D (duhhh, which way did he go george? which way did he go?!)
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Heh

could you pop me in, late I know? :P I want to be really normal heh

nothing special

I'm just a friendly blue wabbit
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ack, this'll be complicated...



well anywayyy



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The So called Goddess of Thunder

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Ducky finnally moved and woke up. Her surroundings a dark gloomified cave. She reached for her staff, sparif would light the place up a bit. Her paw grabbed the staff and she attempted to make it glow.

"CHING!" the staff chinged(?) and lit up like the sun. She was thankful. The cave was vacant for the moment, she checked herself to make sure nothing was missing.

"At least I wasn't mugged," she commented to herself. "Tunic, shirt, blaster, hood, staff, am..." Ducky stopped and looked at an amber necklace with a butterfly inside of it. "Hi little butterfly," she said. Then the grey striped rabbit noticed it was getting hot. Her staff was now emitting an even stronger glow! She stopped the flow of light and got up. "Ow!" the silver bunny yelled and rubbed herself on the head. She now crawled outside as the cave was smaller then expected. Still crawling, wise Ducky inspected the ground. Dirt... more dirt... a little grass... a gem? Diamondus!!! Oh how she missed thee! She kissed the ground. Then she noticed a tinier rabbit, about half her height but a little older mimicking her.

"Stop that!" Greyrabbit said. The migit rabbit imitated "Stop thit." Ducky had been mocked. She got up and pointed her gun at the little guy.

"Meant nothing!!!" the blue little rabbit screamed and ran off. Ducky scratched her head confused. This was diamondus, but what era? She looked at the gem again... it was huge! In fact... she had seen only one this huge before, at the museum with a lizard trapped in it, but this had none. Still looking at it, she noticed the blue migit returning with many more blue short migits, they bowed and chanted at her...

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Maybe I should start writing in word so it looks longer =P
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K, I fixed my prof in the thread. Use the latest one, pleez. . .



Awesomeness! The story is great!
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Me! Thats ME! Oohyah. YaY, Kaz, spiffy, continue, rux0r, j00 r00l or whatever I'm supposed to say. You get my drift :P

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This story roOlz! More!



(I'm about to faint from lack of story)
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Neat, Kaz, please continue.
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Hold on please, must wait for CT to faint, jk, I'll work on it...
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Ha ha. Very funny, Piz.
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*exasperated* You guys, this is not "Something's missing". If you want to send "secret" messages, go over there.




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HEh, now I find the file



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yes laternow!



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