Jazz Jackrabbit 2 Online

I am impressed. While this level is merely avrage, it is quite rare for a first level to be that good. I was extremely suprised to see that you used the tileset properly for the most part. Keep working on levels, because I believe you are able to improve your skills beond what I have seen. Unfortunately, this level begs for a better layout, and it requires some usage of destruct scenery on the signs, one way events on the branches, and better eyecandy. I also sugest that you put a bit less text in your future levels, as they can get quite annoying.

I found it quite hard to move around in this level. Study the layout of better levels, and see what works. When you finish your level, be sure that you test it extensively to make sure it is easy and fun to play in. I sugest using more platforms.

This level doens’t really have anything totally unique in it, but that is OK because few levels do. You should keep making levels, and try to improve your level making ability.

La La La… waiting for some critics =)

I dont have much time or lust to go and review this so i will keep it short.
This is okay for your first level, you should also go and review other people’s levels (objectively where you can). (that as a side note since no-one seems to get it!)

EHmm as for the level… Evilmike says almost everything there exept that he’s a bit harsh.
The text in fact is the most annoying thing of the level popping up again and again…

Yes thats pretty much all I can think of that hasnt been said.

A 6 for your troubles. naaaaw its your first ill make it 6.2

Wow. Most first levels are not this good. You should really keep making levels.

This is an interesting level with very nice eyecandy. Amazingly for this being a first level, the tile set is used correctly. Bravo. The layout, however, leaves something to be desired. However, I have no other complaints about this level. Item placement is not bad at all, and it seems to navigate OK. This is definitely worth the download, and I hope that the author continues to make many, many, many more levels. ;-P

A 6.5.

Okay, now about the level, your first level you say, well you must go on with building levels because this one is realy good!

EYECANDY:
Well at some points the eyecandy is good. For example: on the grass there are standing flowers and that strange long green thing. The vines stuff is not so good. At one point, the vine just stopped, and the other point the vine nice connect with that strange long plant thing. That cave part is also a little bad. I can’t explane it, you have too look for yourself. But the eyecandy is, for your first level, rather good.

ITEMS:
Power-ups are okay, also enouf weapons, but you can reach the power-ups too easy. For example: there is just liging a Seeker power- up on the floor. Next time make blocks ore something before it. There is also a warp very difficult too find! But then the reward is okay: weapon 5 ammo +15 and 2 weapon crates of gun 2 and also a full heal carrot.

GAMEPLAY:

The gameplay is a little long, you have too touch first the Trigger Zone and then you can get too the base. And the level is also a little long. I came from base too base in 5 minutes! But for the rest, it’s okay, I think.

I THINK WITH A 7 FOR YOUR FIRST LEVEL, AND A CTF LEVEL IS REALY DIFFICULT TO BUILD, YOU MUST BE VERY HAPPY.