Man, This is an awesome story! Wait A Minuite! This is the 200th Post! congrats Rumbo on haviong such an immersive topic

Oh, and i claim 6th page!

Tee hee thanks Ax Man. Do't frget Lonely Voyager, the story I'm gonna be doing after Renegade...



Rumbo

Meanwhile, above the surface of Carrottus.



The rest of the resistance stood togehter as they watched the three teams go their separate ways, past, present and future. Lori and Dr Jones hugged in fear that none of them would return, alive that is.

'Hush,' Dr Jones said in a whisper, 'They will be alright, I know it....'

'I'm scared,' Lori said, 'I'm scared about Rumbo. Where is he?'

'I don't know,' Dr Jones replied, I' don't know...'



Rumbo and Angel jumped through TIME's warps endlessly until they reached the outerworld of Nebula's home, what some rabbits called the 'Underworld'. It looked awful, like a maze of caves that were darker then pitch black, and I'm not just talking about the darkness itself. Creatures of both Gargant's and Nebula's creation spawn and feed here, living in the dark to protect and hide themselves away from their creators. They weren't bad creations, not like Nebula...



'So now where?' Angel asked.

'A right then middle and then another right,' Rumbo said, 'I have been here before. It will take us to Nebula's part.'

'That where Gargant once lived?'

'Yes.'

The two then went in through the caves, first the right which bended round to another set, this time of five caves. They took the middle route and headed down a stright yet dark path. Both Rumbo and Angel could see clearly though, they both shared nightvision. Once through here they had to crawl down the right cave as it was smaller and more concealed. This led to an enormous lair that was so high it was like being inside Carrotus Castle.

'Wow...' Angel said.

'Follow me,' Rumbo said as he hot footed it off down a mountain slide which they were standing on. Angel followed. As they went down he saw what looked like a very large cave where people once lived....

I wnder where Rumbo and Angel go to next

Talec, Coppertop, Splash and Nobara headed down the sewer pipe, heading south towards something glowing red and yellow up ahead.



'By the way,' Talec said to Nobara, 'where does your name come from?'

'Thats a secret,' Nobara said, 'but call me Wildie I prefer it.'

'Oh okay...'

'Stop everyone!' Splash said as he saw the glowing piping close up ahead.

'What is over there?' Coppertop asked.

'I have no idea,' Talec said as he stepped a little closer. He observed the glowing carefully. It was pulsing, first red, then yellow and back to red again in a continuous pattern.

'What could it be?' Wildie asked.

'Lets find out!' Splash said as he began running forward.

'Splash, no!' Talec said as heran after him. The others followed too.



After travelling a little more through the pipe they saw what was pulsing with those colours. It was some kind of generator. It was big and semicircular like half a barrel placed on the ground. It had loads of buttons all over it and was glowing with bright colours that made everyone wince their eyes.

'A generator...' Talec said, 'but for what purpose?'

The generator glowed with blue and yellow colours now.

'I think were about to find out,' Splash said as they stood back a little.

The generator suddenly created a large warp above it, which warped three creations on hovercrafts out of it into the sewer pipe. They raced at top speed towards the four rabbits.

'Duck!' Coppertop yelled as they approached. They all did so and only just managed to miss being hit and flattened.

The creations kept going, yet there was one that lagged behind a little. Talec quickly drew out a blaster and shot the creation. He killed it and the hovercraft stopped. He ran over to it and said to the others:

'Guys, go into that warp, I'm going after those creations, ok?'

'Talec,' Wildie said.

'Just do it!' he said back as he sped off on the hovercraft, chasing after the two creations. The others didn't stop and hesitate, they went towards the warp and jumped into it, unawatre of where they were heading...



-MEANWHILE-

'Not far now,' Rumbo said as they had finally reached the bottom of the mountain slide.

'Good,' Angel said, 'my back is killing me.'

'One question, Angel, an you create anything?'

'Erm yeah why?'

'Couldn't you have just created some kind of craft to fly us down the mountain?'

Angel went purple over his red fur, 'Erm...yeah....sorry...'

'Forget about it,' Rumbo said with a smile.

They went across to the large cave and peeped inside it. They saw lots of scientific equipment and documents, all pilled up and not a filing cabinet in sight.

'Tidy,' Angel sarcastically commented with a smile.

'Indeed it is...'

'You can say that again, Rumbo...'

'Erm, Angel, I didn't say that...'

Angel looked at Rumbo, 'Then who...'

Both then suddenly turned and looked into the cave as a purple mist came out of the floor. From the mist came what looked like a floating rabbit with no feet. It was a ghost.

'...Father?'' Rumbo said, walking closer a little.

'Indeed it is my son,' Gargant said back, emerging from the purple mist, 'I no longer lived like I used to.'

Rumbo smiled and began to cry, 'I'm sorry, father...'

'It is not your fault, Rumbo' Gargant said, 'it is my fault for raising you with a father as a liar and untrustworthy.'

'No father,' Rumbo said, 'I know why you did what you did. I understand..'

'I thank you son...both my sons...' Gargant said, looking at Angel. Angel stepped forward a little.

'Do I really exist?' Angel asked Gargant, 'Am I really a person?'

'You were the son I had when you were first born. You were two personalities in the same body. When you were banished from Carrotus Castle you changed and became the Rumbo Rabbit I see before me. You both exist, my sons, I did not have one child I had two. I am so proud of you both...'

'But I have died three times!' Rumbo said, 'And I never knew Angel existed.'

'Does that really matter?' Gargant asked, 'He lives and now you know. You are one person as two. Only you two can stop Nebula. Not even the resistance can.'

'You made that stuff up about me being leader didn't you?' Rumbo said, 'You made me go there by lying to me.'

'It was the only way, Rumbo...'

'I guess so. Nebula has to be stopped.'

'Definitely,' Angel said, 'but how?'

'That is what we must find out,' Gargant said, 'but now is not the time to stand and think. You have a friend in need.'

'Who?' Angel asked.

'Talec,' Rumbo said, sensing him, 'hes alone, underground. I'll go and help him.'

'Me too!' Angel said.

'No, stay here...' Rumbo said, 'I will go alone. Only one of us is going to die, not both.'

Angel nodded with regret.

Rumbo then raced off through a TIME warp, heading back into the sewer piping.

'What can I do?' Angel asked.

'Wait, wait for the others,' Gargant said, 'Past was successful, Present still continues and the Future will succeed...'

Chapter 4: Future



Defalcon

Ax Man

Unknown Rabbit



Three rabbits journeying towards the future. They needed a warp generator to get there due to the unpredictability of future TIME settings. Luckily defalcon owned one since he was a TIME traveller.

'Lets go, team!' he said as the warp opened. They all jumped in, one after the other.



The future was undoubtedly different from the present and the past...



Grass was metallic, buildings were non-rectangular and the sun no longer appeared to exist, with the moon taking its full time job in the sky without payment. That was the only kins hearted thing that existed in this 'world'.

'What happened?' Ax man asked.

'Nebula happened, that's what!' Unknown Rabbit said.

'Lets look around,' defalcon said as he led the team into a large, what looked like a city yet was more like a shopping centre. There were about five different 'levels' of houses, buildings and the others were inexplicable.

'Wow,' Ax man said, 'this sure isn't like home.'

'What where Nebula rules at the moment?' Unknown Rabbit said.

'Oh yeah...sorry.'

'Stop everyone,' defalcon said as he heard something coming from around the next corner. He could see a shadow coming from a light somewhere around there. The shadow looked robotic-like.

'Looks like we found out first robot,' Ax man said.

'Quiet,' defalcon said, 'lets follow it and see where it goes.'

They followed it as it went past them and headed towards a docking bay. The docking bay was basically a huge road that suddenly ended in mid air, where cargo ships and fighter ships would land and pick up and drop off cargo and people if necessary.

The three rabbits hid behind some crates half way down the docking bay, out of sight from about ten robots who the one they followed had joined.

'What should we do?' Unknown asked.

'Wait, thats all we can do,' defalcon said.

'Why you so melodramatic?'

'Cause hes playing leader,' Ax man said.

'Over my dead...' Unknown said but was stopped as a large cargo ship landed at the docking bay. It was massive, like a large boat with metal wings and propellers, plus about a million engines stacked around the back of the vessel.

'Shall we hijack it?' Ax man asked.

'We'll be stow-aways,' Unknown said with a smile.

'Lets go!' defalcon said, ignoring the mild joke.

'Jesus....' Unknown said.

'Who?' Ax man asked.

'Come on!' defalcon said to them.

Ax man shrugged their shoulders as he followed Unknown out, heading towards defalcon as he approached the cargo ship.

As the ten robots got in they sneaked on board and hid behind yet another set of crates which were soon to be moved.

'Now what?' Ax man asked.

'Stop asking the quesions!' Unknown said.

'We'll have to get inside.' defalcon said.

'Okay then...' Unknown said as he carefully pulled the lid off one of the crates they hid behind. All three of them managed to jump inside.



-Two cargo carrying robots came over and began taking one crate each-

'Errr....Larry?'

'What is it...Gary?'

'This crate...I can't lift it...'

'You big woss....let me...argh my hands! They were almost ripped off!'

'Let us both try...'

'Still too heavy!'

'Hey...Barry!'

'What?'

'Come over here and help me and Gary lift this crate!'

'Bloomin heck it's heavy!'

'Now what?'

'We need more robots....'

'Oi, Harry!'

'WHAT?'

'Help us lift this crate....'

It took Barry, Larry, Gary and Harry to lift this one crate, which they didn't realise had three heavyweight rabbits inside it. They were only cargo carryers, they weren't exactly meant to be smart.

Nice, Rumb

Yah I reckon what he said.

*chortle*

`Ducky

Wow, I'm heroic. That's a new one.



I guess I'm not very religious. Who's Jesus again?

Woohoo! Go Rumbo!

'Rumb'?



Spiffin!



~Talec LP

Ax Man, Unknown Rabbit and Defalcon, when the coast was clear, burst out of their crate and hid in the cargo area of the ship.

'Where's this thing going?' Ax Man asked.

Unknown read the sides of the crates, 'I have a feeling were heading to where the robots are gonna depart for our TIME...'

Defalcon came over and read one side of a crate. 'Atomic weapons' was what was wirtten on it. Unknown saw another with 'Explosives' and then Ax Man saw one that horrified him...

'Ahhh!' he shouted.

'What is it?' Unknown asked.

'Nuclear weapons?' Defalcon asked.

'No...'

'Warheads?' Unknown asked.

'No...'

'Then what?'

'R.....R....RAW FISH!'

'...What?' Defalcon asked.

'They're using Raw fish! Now I am terrified!'

'You gotta be joking, Ax...'

'No way, don't you realise that Rabbis hate the feeling of raw fish. It makes us tingle and loose our concentration.'

'I've never touched raw fish...' Defalcon said.

'Neither have I,' Unknown said.

'Well I have,' Ax Man said, 'It was horrible. Like slime running down your spine.'

'I never felt slime either...' Unknown said.

'Oh for crying out loud shut up you lot!' Defalcon said, 'We have to keep quiet. They're coming back.'

They hid back inside their crate and waited. Two robots came passed their crate and luckilly didn't stop.

'Phew!' Unknown said.

'Close call,' Ax Man said.

'Lets see exactly where this ship is going!' Defalcon said as they got out of the crate and checked their weapons were intact. All of them were well prepared for the worse, even if they had no possible idea what that could be. Well they were soon going to find out...

That's kewl story!!



The moment Rumbo last "died", was

sad.. But great!!

Cawls back from inner vacation



Cool story, Rumb



BTW: any chance of being MOD on new storycentral?

ewww, raw fish...

Yeah, I don't think I've felt slime either. Mind answering my question?

Psycho sign up on ezboard and then register on Story Central so I actually can!



Jesus is my father, there you go



Rumbo (more coming later..ugh oh that came out wrong...AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!)

You said Gargant was.

Ax Man, Defalcon and Unknown were on board the cargo ship heading for a certain part of future Carrotus. They had no idea where they were going, until they had got there.



'Wow...' Unknown said

'Wow...more like time to panic...' Ax Man replied.

'...' Defalcon pondered



All three of them looked out of the side window of the cargo bay and saw their destination, a large Tower floating on a large platform in the air. There were millions of other cargo ships arriving, each carrying tons of weapons and tons of raw fish, and only a few billion robots too.



'What are we supposed to do?' Ax Man asked Defalcon.

'Nothing yet...' Defalcon replied.

'We wait?' Unknown asked.

'Yeah.'

'For what?'

'For the right moment...'

'How are we gonna stop those robots?' Ax Man asked, 'This is obviously the place where they are going to meet and warp into the past, right?'

'Yes...'

'So what do we do?' Unknown asked.

'We're not in the future...' Defalcon replied.

'What?' Ax Man said

'I will explain, follow me.'

Defalcon went out of the cargo bay towards the rear of the ship, where they would get a better view of the tower. Ax Man and Unknown followed...

I'm not in the future, it's always the present

It's future for someone, not necessarily me

The future and present, are past for other futures

but not in the future means something else here, I can see.

God Unknown you've confused me even more lol. By the way all readers sign up to Story Central if you havent already!!!!!!!



Rumbo

Hmm..if unknown didnt say that i didnt lose track either...*lol*

LoL, Unknown and Rumbo



Nice update ^_^ Buttttt.... Continue more!



~Talec LP

Yah, what Tallie said.

`Ducky

Ditto.



And put me in the story, I'd like to see that.

Defalcon, Ax Man and Unknown went to get a better view of the tower. Defalon knew something the other two didnt...



'This isn't where we think we are.' Defalcon said with a smile

'Why?' Ax Man said

'And why the grin?' Unknown asked.

'Because this isn't our world, only another world that Nebula created...' Defalcon then started to laugh.

'What's so funny?' Unknown asked

'Don't you see?' Defalcon said, 'Nebula doesn't control the future, NOBODY CAN! Instead our path was led to a world that Nebula created to impersonate his future, where he is creating all the robots.'

'Of course he can control the future!' Ax Man said, 'If he has control of our present then years later he might still have control...'

'But he doesn't...'

'Why?'

'Because the good guys always win...'

Even short stuff can be cool



Look up for proof

The good guys always win

even though the fight makes a din

everyone screams and hollers

while Nebula's anxieties get taller

because he knows he won't ever win.

yAy yAy yAy YaY YaY YaY

YaY YaY YaY yAy yAy yAy



And what happened to ?

What do you mean the good guys always win? Al Gore nor George bush lost... =D... okay, jk, I'll shut up now.

Tallie, is that my new nickname? :P



Continue!



~Talec LP

The cargo ship landed safely by the edge of the tower base as many robots in different shapes and sizes came towards it from the ground below. Once the ship had stopped the cargo ramp was released and the stupid cargo robots began to unload the rates to the wheeledcargo carriers below which were like forklift trucks. Once they were full they took the cargo towards the tower.



'So what are you saying?' Ax Man said to Defalcon, 'that this is just another of Nebula's worlds and is trying to fool us?'

'Yup. He cannot predict the future, yet alone create it on Carrotus. Besides the colour of the sky is so different from what it used to be and what it is now on Carrotus.'

'You mean old and new?' Unknown asked.

'Yes. Come on we have to find out what is going on.'

'That's obvious isn't it?' Ax Man said, 'they're bringing these robots towards our present time. It doesn't matter whether they are from the future or not...'

'Yeah but I wanna know where they are transporting and how were gonna destroy it.'

'Look I'm sorry guys but I've had enough of this hiding stuff.' Unknown said, drawing out his blaster, 'I'm gonna kick some as and if you don't like it then...'

'Doesn't matter if you do...' Ax Man said as he stared up at something peculiar.

'Whys that?' Unknown said.

'Because WE'VE ALREADY BEEN SPOTTED!' Ax Man then rolled out the way as a massive robot came crashing down upon them trying to swipe them with its large arm. Defalcon jumped out, drew out his blaster and shot at the robot's stomach. It hit the robot dead centre and causes the robot's body to separate and literally self destruct. Unknown saw another two coming and decided it was best to team up.

'Stay together!' Unknown shouted as he fired at one of the robots approaching. He just managed to get it right in the chest and caused a large explosion that knocked the second robot over to one side. Ax Man took it as his opportunity to fire one of his own bullets. He shot the robot right where he wanted and caused yet another explosion.

Suddenly a loud siren wailed as the three had been spotted on the cargo ship. They decided it was best to.....

'RUN!!!!!!!!' Defalcon shouted as he jumped off the side of the Cargo Ship.

'I think you'll find that's jumping.' Unknown said.

'JUST DO IT!'

'Okay okay i'm not gonna argue,' he replied as he jumped off the ship. Ax Man then followed. They grouped together and began to fire at every robot they could see and find...



Meanwhile...back in the sewer system...

Talec began to speed up on his jetski, catching up with the creations that he was after. As he got close one of the creations took out a large blaster and fired back at him. Talec swerved to one side and dodged the explosion, which slightly pushed him forward as he went past it. Just as Talec was about to fire back with his own blaster he heard some shots being fired at the creations up ahead. One of the creations was knocked off his hovercraft and the other fell forward onto his steering whell and crashed into the side of the pipe. Talec slowed down as he saw who was up ahead.

'Rumbo!' Talec shouted as he jumped off and ran for him.

Rumbo just stood there as Talec ran up to him and gave him a big friendly hug.

(awwwww)

'Hey take it easy,' Rumbo said, blushing a little.

(awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww)

'I'm glad you're still alive my friend,' Talec replied, 'We found this sewer system that leads underground. Back there is a warp drive that leads somewhere. The others have headed that way but I don't know where it leads...'

'The tower.'

'The what?'

'Nebula's Tower. It is his home and where Spaz and Lori have been held. I have sent the resistance there and hopefully they'll do some of the dirty work for us.'

'You mean you left them to fight on their own.'

'TIME prophesised their survival, plus I trust them with my life.'

'You sure have changed, Rumbo.'

'Well that's what dying three times does to you.'

Talec laughed and so did Rumbo, yet they knew that TIME was running out.

'So now what?' Talec asked.

'We head to the tower also.'

'But what about the past and future parties.'

'Past is successful and the future is nonexistant.'

Talec knew what he meant by this, 'You mean we are gonna win?'

'Yeah.'

'And Nebula knows this?'

'But he's trying to change so much that we don't yet he doesn't have the power that we have.'

'What's that?'

'Friendship.'

Talec and Rumbo then shook hands and went to Talec's hovercraft. They turned round and headed for the warp drive.

'But what about the creations?' Talec said.

'Once Nebula is defeated then all will be restored, including them.'

'But haven't their lvies been taken?'

'Yes but once it is over none of this would have happened.'

'Will we remember this?'

'Of course. Like TIME says if it happened to you then it only happened to you.'

'I get you. So we go now?'

'Yes, Talec, we go now...'

And they went *lol*



Good one, Rumb

JUMP! THE ROBOTS ARE COMING!



It just doesn't sound the same.



Oh well.



Good chapter/continuation. You can't just leave us here! More! Now! ;p

BzZzZzT!!! Time flaw that could lead to another story!

The three rabbits in the supposed future of Carrotus ran towards the tower as they realised the odds were against them. As they fired back another three squadrons of robots came from another cargo ship, carrying robots of course.

'We'd better get moving!' Ax Man stated, 'We're not gonna last that long!'

'Lets go!' Unknown said.

As Ax Man and Unknown began to run, Defalcon just stood still, watching the robots approach him.

Ax Man turned and said, 'Hey come on, Defalc we haven't got time!'

'Oh we have TIME alright.' Defalcon said as three robots appraoched him, ready to swipe at him.



-LET BATTLE COMMENCE-

Defalcon Vs Three rather huge robots.



Defalcon rubbed his hands together and created a loud sound coming from them. Hh then separated his hands and revealed a large blue swirling ball, a ball of TIME.

'Eat this!' Defalcon said as he threw the ball at the middle robot, creating a massive TIME warp that sucked all three robots in. The warp then disappeared.

'What the...' Unknown said.

'Hey more are coming!' Ax Man shouted.

Defalcon knew, after seeing about a hundred robots that it was time to move...



The three began to run as the squadrons of robots ran after them. They weren't going to let those pesky rabbits ruin their chances of world domination.

Ax Man was in front and Unknown and Defalcon were at the back.

Suddenly as they ran two robots jumped down upon them, one inbetween Ax Man and Unknown and one in front of Ax Man.

'(/)!' Ax Man shouted.



-LET BATTLE COMMENCE-

Ax Man Vs Robot

The Robot leaned over to him and tried to hit him with its large metallic arm. Ax Man jumped and just managed to dodge it, drawing out his blaster in mid air.

'Eat this you metallic *******!' Ax Man shouted as he fired right at the robots stomach. The robot couldn't resist as his body separated and exploded!

'Oh yeah!' Ax Man said out loud.



-LET BATTLE COMMENCE-

Unknown and Defalcon Vs Robot

'Lets take this sucker!' Unknown said, drawing out a blaster. As he did the robot swiped at him and knocked him backwards, dropping his gun in the process. Defalcon managed to roll to one side and drew out his blaster. By this time the robot wasn't facing Defalcon and was heading for Unknown, meaning he couldn't shoot his middle and destroy it.

Unknown lay there and looked up to see a large robot looking down at him.

'ARRRGGH!' came a loud scream as Ax Man ran at the robot and pounced on it, knocking it to the floor onto one side.

'Get away from the robot, Ax Man!' Defalcon shouted at him.

But he was too late. The robot swerved round and grabbed Ax Man with his claw. But by this time Unknown had reunited with his blaster ad fired right at the robots chest, making it explode and Ax Man to fly from its grasp and into the air. Defalcon ran over and caught Ax Man as he landed.

'My hero!' Ax Man said, pretending to kiss him.

'Shut it!' Defalcon said, almost blushing.

'Keep going!' Unknown shouted, 'They're still on their way.'



The three continued towards the tower in desperate hope of survival.

Derby: Subtle content edit.

(awwwwwwww)



Very nice. And the other standard comments.

Good, but i think it misses something fromt heother parts....i dunno



good though

Yeh, spiffy. I haven't replied in a while have I? but I read them. They were all spiffy. Congratulations..

`Ducky