Register FAQ Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read
Go Back   JazzJackrabbit Community Forums » Open Forums » The Art & Fiction Forum

JCF Poetry Slam

Odin Odin's Avatar

Banned

Joined: Dec 2003

Posts: 3,776

Odin is doing well so far

Apr 8, 2008, 11:12 AM
Odin is offline
Reply With Quote
JCF Poetry Slam

Since this technically falls under art (literature is an art) and it's not Jazz related, post your poetry here. Free verse, sonnets, quartrains, hell, even haiku, post your work!

Here's a poem I wrote while bored out of my skin in in-school suspension, for my love. :3

Constants

300 million miles from Sol
To Earth, a measurement known as AU,
Density equals mass over volume,
An equation, constant as I Love You.

Fibonacci, primes, perfect squares, and i,
Logic and numbers that stay and hold true,
Things that will never change, though some may try
To debunk the constant of I Love You.

Also, don't be shy to post yourself reading the poems. Poetry is best experienced while read aloud. And this coming from a guy who can only stand poetry from Langston Hughes, Robert Frost, and Ogden Nash.
Caffne

JCF Member

Joined: Nov 2007

Posts: 71

Caffne is doing well so far

Apr 8, 2008, 11:57 AM
Caffne is offline
Reply With Quote
Poem? Oh really?
A mockery of justice,
hidin' behind stuff.

Cold hearted haiku btw.
__________________
<span style="font-variant:small-caps;">things aint been the same since the blues walked into town.</span>
Fawriel Fawriel's Avatar

JCF Éminence Grise

Joined: May 2002

Posts: 11,990

Fawriel is doing well so far

Apr 8, 2008, 12:38 PM
Fawriel is offline
Reply With Quote
Oh, I see... I was expecting a contest. I wonder whether it would be possible to have a real poetry slam in a forum like this... Granted, I'm not entirely sure how a poetry slam works in real life. I've only been to one that wasn't so much a poetry slam as a bunch of hilarious awesome people performing artistic stand-up comedy. A real poetry slam is sort of like a rap battle without the dissing, right?

I'd love to read out some poetry, but I don't have any recent poems to present.
__________________
Stijn Stijn's Avatar

Administrator

Joined: Mar 2001

Posts: 6,965

Stijn is a splendid one to beholdStijn is a splendid one to beholdStijn is a splendid one to beholdStijn is a splendid one to beholdStijn is a splendid one to beholdStijn is a splendid one to beholdStijn is a splendid one to behold

Apr 8, 2008, 12:43 PM
Stijn is offline
Reply With Quote
Ok, poetry contest. I donate 5 euros to the paypal account of the writer of the best poem. Prize only goes if there are at least 7 entries (1 entry per contestant). Judge is probably me, but if anyone got a better idea feel free to suggest.

Inspirational keyword: summer breeze. But feel free to deviate!

Last edited by Stijn; Apr 8, 2008 at 01:00 PM.
n00b

JCF Veteran

Joined: May 2004

Posts: 5,578

n00b is an asset to this forumn00b is an asset to this forum

Apr 8, 2008, 12:50 PM
n00b is offline
Reply With Quote
n00b's totally awesome entry:

I was facing an utmost delusion,
Peaked at its impeccable illusion,
A breeze thought from Summer's heart,
Was instead a passerby's fart.
Xobim Xobim's Avatar

JCF Member

Joined: May 2005

Posts: 2,454

Xobim is doing well so far

Apr 9, 2008, 07:50 AM
Xobim is offline
Reply With Quote
Summer breeze
makes me freeze
so I had to squeeze
a lemon

(totally un-serious not-entry BTW)
__________________
Earth Mantra, for all your ambient music needs.
Odin Odin's Avatar

Banned

Joined: Dec 2003

Posts: 3,776

Odin is doing well so far

Apr 9, 2008, 10:42 AM
Odin is offline
Reply With Quote
I didn't really mean this to be a contest or anything, just an invitation for fellow JCFers to post their poetry (since I seem to have a passing interest in it now). I'm expecting stuff from Violet especially.
Stijn Stijn's Avatar

Administrator

Joined: Mar 2001

Posts: 6,965

Stijn is a splendid one to beholdStijn is a splendid one to beholdStijn is a splendid one to beholdStijn is a splendid one to beholdStijn is a splendid one to beholdStijn is a splendid one to beholdStijn is a splendid one to behold

Apr 9, 2008, 10:55 AM
Stijn is offline
Reply With Quote
No, of course, I'm not trying to hijack your thread or something. Just trying to encourage people to post poems here, since I think it's a great idea, and contests in the art forum are cool
Erik Erik's Avatar

JCF Member

Joined: Mar 2005

Posts: 1,304

Erik is doing well so far

Apr 9, 2008, 11:19 AM
Erik is offline
Reply With Quote
Literary masterpiece.

(-) the police
Coming straight from the underground
A young (-) got it bad 'cos I'm brown
And not the other color so police think
They have authority to kill a minority

Well (-) that (-) 'cos I ain't the one
For a punk (-) with a badge and a gun
To be beaten on, and thrown in jail
We could go toe to toe in the middle of a cell

(-)ing with me 'cos I'm a teenager
With a little bit of gold and a pager
Searching my car, looking for the product
Thinking every (-) is selling narcotics
Odin Odin's Avatar

Banned

Joined: Dec 2003

Posts: 3,776

Odin is doing well so far

Apr 9, 2008, 01:23 PM
Odin is offline
Reply With Quote
Quote:
Originally Posted by Stijn View Post
No, of course, I'm not trying to hijack your thread or something. Just trying to encourage people to post poems here, since I think it's a great idea, and contests in the art forum are cool
I know, I was just saying. I think contests are cool as well.
Reply

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On

Forum Jump

All times are GMT -8. The time now is 01:22 PM.